Three ways to improve your grand gesture

I’m about to say something which might have my Romance Writers Card revoked…

I was never a big fan of the grand gesture.

I know, I know. It’s the moment that’s supposed to make you all gooey inside. It’s the moment that gives you that warm and fuzzy feeling of satisfaction. When done well, it’s the scene readers will remember long after they finish a book.

But it took me a long time to embrace this part of writing romance.

You’ll read plenty of novels where the hero gives a public speech to declare his love for the heroine, sometimes it occurs during another character’s wedding or at another important event. Or maybe the heroine stands up for the hero in public. And then there’s the classic running towards the airport gate/taxi/train etc.

I think the part of the grand gesture that I struggled to connect with was the “grand” aspect. I’m all about a sweet gesture, or a thoughtful gesture. But grand? It’s not really me. However, the gesture doesn’t necessarily need to be grand or extravagant, if that’s not your style.

What it should do is bring the reader full circle.


Here are a few ways that you can give extra oomph to your grand gesture:

Completing the arc

A grand gesture is a great way to show how much a character has developed. It should involve something they would never have done at the beginning of the story.

For example, in Betting the Bad Boy the hero grew up in the foster system and was moved frequently from one home to the next. So, when he finally got out of the system, it was important for him to live alone because then nobody would ever be able to kick him out. He wouldn’t even bring his date back to his house because it was his ‘safe space.’ Therefore, his grand gesture involves giving a key to the heroine and asking her to live with him.

Making a sacrifice

Grand gestures are especially impactful when one character gives up something to be with the other character. For this to work, the sacrifice needs to be something of high value. This also works especially well when the heroes and/or heroines have strongly opposed goals.

The sacrifice also needs to come about because they’ve changed as characters. So, it’s not about a woman giving up a job she really wants simply to be with the hero. It’s about a character giving up a cause they were chasing because their relationship has fundamentally changed the character.

For example, in Bad Bachelor Reed is determined to bring down the person who created the Bad Bachelor app. But at the end of the book, he realises that doing so will irreparably hurt his relationship with Darcy. So he has to sacrifice his need for retribution in order to find his HEA with Darcy. He can only make this sacrifice because he’s changed as a character over the course of the book. 


Grand gestures that mirror an event from earlier in the story gives a sense of closure and familiarity to the reader. As humans, we always seek out patterns and repetition, so this is a very effective technique. You may also hear this referred to as ‘bookending.’ The trick is to mirror an important moment for the characters, rather than just putting them in the same location at beginning and end.

For example, from Mr. Dangerously Sexy the heroine, Addison, comes to learn that the hero secretly organized a wreath of yellow roses for her father’s funeral, because her father had always used the roses to apologise after an argument. It showed he knew what was important to her, and that even though he was the kind of person who would never say it aloud, he cared about her very much. The grand gesture for that story involves a room full of yellow roses. By itself that gesture would be sweet and romantic, but having it tied to an earlier event gives the gesture a deeper importance and meaning.

Final note… 

You can absolutely mix and match these grand gesture types as they’re not mutually exclusive. Put a sacrifice with a bookend, or complete an arc while the character gives up something important. If you’re stuck, try writing a grand gesture that fits each one of these types and see what works best.

 Happy writing!

Red Flags in Publishing

NB. This post was originally written for the Toronto Public Library.

For many writers, going out on submission for the first time brings about mixed emotions. What if everybody rejects your manuscript? Or what if you're given conflicting feedback? Or what if you're that rare person who has plenty of offers and you don't know which one to take? 

Unfortunately, the excitement of an offer from an editor or agent can sometimes overshadow niggling doubts we have about contract terms and other important aspects of the publishing process. But publishing, like many other industries, has its dark corners and there are definitely things you should watch out for.


Reading Fees, Editing Fees and Other Charges

If you're looking to traditionally publish your manuscript, it's important to understand how everyone gets paid. On average, agents will take 15% of your earnings. Royalty rates and advances vary, but often this information can be found on the submission portion of the publisher's website.

The percentage taken by the agent and publishing house covers the reading, submission process, all stages of editing, production, marketing (although it's expected authors will do marketing activities as well), and distribution of your book. If an agent or publisher asks you for money up-front to cover the cost of any of these activities, as well as wanting to take a percentage of each book sold, be wary. Agents and publishers should make their money from the sale of your book, not from charging the author. The only time a writer should pay a fee up-front for someone to read or work on their manuscript is if they're hiring a freelance professional.

Restrictive Contract Terms

Publishing contracts are not always the easiest documents to decipher and this is one reason authors might sign with an agent.

These two contract clauses provide restrictions on the author beyond the initial manuscript, and are definitely worth looking at:

  • Conflict of interest clauses

  • First right of refusal clauses

Conflict of Interest Clause

This clause is found in most manuscripts, so it's not a red flag in itself. But authors should read this one very carefully as it may impact the author's publishing schedule. This clause prevents the author from publishing other books within the same or similar genre for a period of time around the release of the contracted manuscript. It's common that publishers don't want an author putting out two books in the same month, but if the contract restricts you from publishing another book in the same year then authors should think about how this will impact their career.

First Right of Refusal Clause

This clause relates to a contractual obligation that means the author has to show the next manuscript to their current publisher before they can take it on submission elsewhere. Again, this is a common clause and its appearance alone isn't cause for worry. But the more narrowly defined this clause is, the better. For example, this clause could be narrowed to only include manuscripts within the same series or set in the same world as the one being contracted. It's also important when working with multiple publishers, to ensure this clause doesn't clash with other open contracts.

Freelancer Red Flags

If you're independently publishing your book, you have the option of choosing your team. This may include a developmental editor, copy editor, proof-reader etc. It's important to do your due diligence and make sure you're paying qualified and professional people. 

Some red flags when hiring freelance editors:

  • It's a good idea to ask for a sample so you can assess the quality and style of editing. You may have to pay for this sample, but it's better to spend a small amount here than hire someone for a large fee and end up being unhappy with their work. You may want to be wary of any editor who refuses to provide a sample. 

  • Be wary of any freelancers who trash books online, whether on review platforms or social media. If your relationship doesn't work out, would they be likely to do this to your book? It wouldn't be the first time a freelancer has taken an author's (or publisher's) money only to then criticize the book online. This is incredibly unprofessional and given there are plenty of great freelance editors and proof-readers out there, it should be an easy issue to avoid. 

  • Always ensure that you're getting the level of editing that you're paying for. A developmental edit (which usually costs more than copy edits or proof-reading) should not simply point out typos and continuity errors. Developmental edits should come with in-depth feedback about the characters, plot, pacing, and clarity of the writing. If you get a sample, as mentioned above, you should be able to see whether the editor is providing the right level of feedback based on what you've asked for.

Working With an Agent

A good agent will help grow your career, will be collaborative and encouraging while also being truthful about your work. A good agent will push your career forward, and a bad agent can be worse than no agent at all. 

If you're going through the querying process with an agent, or if you've already signed with one, here are some red flags to look out for:

  • Be wary of any agent who hasn't read the manuscript but is offering representation. An agent must be intimately familiar with your work in order to best position it with publishers, and to help you grow your career.

  • A good agent will be transparent with how they plan to sell your manuscript. If your agent is unwilling to share details about the submission strategy, this could be a red flag that they won't be likely to share other important information like editorial feedback, industry information etc.

  • Watch out for agents who appear to always side with the publisher. Yes, an agent needs to have a good relationship with publishers and editors, but they also have to represent their author's best interests. If you've signed with an agent who doesn't appear to be backing you, then it might be time to have a conversation about your relationship.

Additional Resources

In addition to the tips above, check out the following resources for authors navigating the publishing landscape:

Good luck!